Powered by Bravenet Bravenet Blog

Tag Board

me_haha: nice!!
texasmd91: hi neice poems =)i sujgest that u add buttons to the nav bar like "acrostic poems" and "hiaku(cant spell)poems" and aoll the other 1s so then the pple looking at poems has a easy way of looking at certaint poems
Jackie: Ha! Im the first to tag your board

Please type in the four characters shown in the black box.

Tuesday, March 2nd 2004

11:38 AM

Failure & Feat Poem

The Big Game

Looking at the crowd

What do I see?

I see people.

 

They’re staring at me

What do I do?

Should I run?

 

Should I try to hide?

Will I swallow the pride?

I will run.

 

Just as I swing the stick.

Very fast!

Very quick!

 

As the ball flies high

In the air

I just stop.

 

And try not to stare

I pass first

And the second

 

Home plate in vision

I slide hard

It’s a close decision.

3 Comment(s).

Posted by Nolan Owings:

i love the way you end this poem, it leave you hanging. good job
Tuesday, March 2nd 2004 @ 11:47 AM

Posted by Kharden:

I agree with Nolan- the ending is good.
Sunday, March 7th 2004 @ 2:52 PM

Posted by gilly ray:

its a great poem that makes you hold your breath and then leaves you hanging. I love it
Tuesday, March 9th 2004 @ 8:08 PM

Post New Comment

 BraveJournal Member Non-Member
No Smilies More Smilies »
Please type the letters you see