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Monday, March 8th 2004

11:13 AM

Alliterative&Narrative Poem

Baseball

Tough, triumph, taught, teammate,

Honor, hit, homerun,

Swing, steal, slide, safe,

Base, bat, bunt.

 

In My Town

People, praying, people, playing

Racing, rebelling, riding

Time, flying, kids, wining

Environment, easy, breezy.

10 Comment(s).

Posted by Nolan Owings:

i like your poems, but its not in a,b,a,b form. i dont have any idea how to fix it and not ruin the good content of the poems but you might think on it
Monday, March 8th 2004 @ 11:36 AM

Posted by @mBeR:

I was going to tell you the same thing as nolan. The poems are really good...just got in a,b,a,b.
Monday, March 8th 2004 @ 11:39 AM

Posted by gilly ray:

In the third line you have "wining" I think it should be "wHining"
Wednesday, March 10th 2004 @ 7:49 AM

Posted by Megan:

You know when I first read this poem I thought it was going to say something bad about it..not because I think your town is bad but because it seems every time I hear people talk about where they live, they speak about their town negatively. I'm glad to see this different take on where you live. It paints a peaceful image in my mind. Very nice poem.
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