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Monday, March 8th 2004

11:28 AM

Punch Line Poem

Thinking

 

Quiet, long, vast, deep

Time, goes, fast

Endless, careless, really, steep

Future, to, past.

3 Comment(s).

Posted by angeldemon04:

I love the rymes in this one. I expecially like how you wrote about thinking. Very creative.
Monday, March 8th 2004 @ 11:32 AM

Posted by Angela Adams:

Time flys when you're havin fun! Or at least...slightly amused. People don't realize that the future is slipping right through their fingers as they go about their daily lives. Kind of a take on "Today is yesterdays tomorrow." Nice!
Monday, March 8th 2004 @ 11:48 AM

Posted by Me:

It kind of makes you think about what will happen to you in the time to come... very nicely writen i am a person of time an thought so in my opinon this is a great work
Monday, March 8th 2004 @ 11:51 AM

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