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Wednesday, February 25th 2004

8:29 AM

Contrast Peom

 

In my town--- 

Quiet, boring, relaxed,

Not fun,

Controlling the area---

The mediator.

 

In a different town---

Fun, exciting, uncomfortable,

Very fun,

Scouting the area---

The instigator.

 

19 Comment(s).

Posted by krharden:

I like this, particularly the last line- the instigator. The only suggestion I have is the word uncomfortable. It is a negative among positives. You might consider replacing with a positive adjective.
Wednesday, February 25th 2004 @ 8:47 AM

Posted by angela browder:

sounds like my town and what i do when i go to another town
Wednesday, February 25th 2004 @ 9:01 AM

Posted by Nolan:

this poem is great, it represents the small town person so well. in the second part though you put fun and very fun right together. the very fun is good but you might think about finding a new word for the first fun. just a suggestion
Friday, February 27th 2004 @ 11:28 AM

Posted by @mBeR:

haha, these poems are you! lol. Very good job jared!!!
Friday, February 27th 2004 @ 11:29 AM

Posted by Lo|2D /-LD3//:

I like it.
Friday, February 27th 2004 @ 11:34 AM

Posted by Angela:

Wow, I really understand what this poem is saying. Originally I lived in St. Joesph... Milan/Unionville is completely different and I don't like it. Planning on going to Kansas City for college and moving back to St. Joseph or maybe Columbia after.

Nice!!
Friday, February 27th 2004 @ 11:50 AM

Posted by angeldemon04:

I think I'm the exact opposite as you. I tend to have more fun in my town or towns that I live like only 10 miles from rather then other places.
Wednesday, March 3rd 2004 @ 7:09 PM

Posted by kharden:

On two of these poems you have called them peoms. Misspelled. Sorry.
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